A Geography of Light: A Story and Open Candlelight Performance Work
What follows came to me in the liminal space between waking and dream—a gray, uncertain place I found myself returning to again and again. At first, I went there only to understand it. Over time, I began to listen.
In that place, movement became sound. Sound became light. Light became shape, memory, image, and language. The more I explored, the more it seemed that I was not simply imagining something, but receiving it—following fragments of music, sensation, and thought as they moved through the space and into me.
I offer the story and the music together as one open creative work. I imagine it as a candlelight performance set in New Orleans and other spaces.
A Life in Eight Passages for Violin, Cello, and Piano
Performance duration: approximately 60 minutes
Violin speaks. Cello remembers. Piano reflects. Silence listens.
Designed for candlelight performance with spatial call-and-response.
The work includes the story, the full score, and individual violin, cello, and piano parts. It is intended to be performed, used, adapted, shared, and built upon.
The Gray Between
The first time I found it, I thought I had awakened too early.
You know that hour.
Not morning.
Not night.
The hour when the room still belongs to darkness, but the darkness has thinned enough to admit that something else is coming.
I remember opening my eyes.
Or thinking I had.
There was no ceiling above me.
No bed beneath me.
No room.
Only gray.
Not fog exactly.
Not sky.
Not ground.
Gray in every direction.
A pale, depthless country made from the moment before something decides what it will become.
I stood there for some time without moving.
At least, I think I did.
Time does strange things there.
Maybe we should agree on that now.
If you come with me, you cannot expect clocks to behave.
Distance will not always behave either.
Memory becomes unreliable.
But sensation—
sensation becomes almost unbearably precise.
I could feel coolness across my arms.
Not cold.
The air touched me like water that had forgotten how to be wet.
There was the faint mineral smell of stone after rain.
Something sweeter underneath it.
Orange blossom, perhaps.
Old wood.
Smoke.
A trace of coffee drifting from a place that could not possibly be nearby.
And silence.
At least I thought it was silence.
Then I lifted my foot.
The moment my heel touched the ground, a note sounded.
One note.
Clear.
Bright.
Somewhere between a bell and a violin string touched very softly.
A circle of light opened beneath my shoe.
Not white light.
Silver at first, then amber at the edges.
It widened across the gray like a ripple across still water.
I froze.
The light froze with me.
I stepped again.
Another note.
Lower.
This time the shape beneath my foot was not a circle.
It unfolded into a thin line, then bent sharply, becoming something like a branch, or a river seen from high above.
Another step.
A third sound answered.
And another shape appeared.
Blue.
Deep cobalt.
It spun once around my ankle before breaking into tiny points.
I laughed.
I remember that.
The sound of my own laugh startled me more than the music.
It was the first ordinary human sound I had heard.
So I walked.
Slowly at first.
One step.
One tone.
Another step.
Another.
D.
F.
E.
A.
G.
I did not know the names then.
I only knew that they were waiting.
Five notes.
Five lights.
Five small disturbances in the gray.
And perhaps this is where you should stop imagining a floor beneath me.
There was something solid enough to walk upon, yes, but I could not see it.
The gray went through the ground.
It continued beneath my feet as though I were walking across the surface of a thought.
Each step revealed the world only for a moment.
Gold spirals.
Lavender lines.
A red shape opening like a flower and collapsing before I could understand it.
Sometimes letters appeared.
Not words.
Pieces of words.
A curved S.
A lowercase e.
Something that might have been the beginning of remember.
Then they dissolved.
I began to test the place.
You would have done the same.
I stepped harder.
The note became louder.
I dragged my foot.
The sound bent.
A violin sliding between pitches.
I turned quickly.
Three lights chased one another around me.
I jumped.
The ground answered with a chord.
That changed everything.
I ran.
The gray exploded.
Music erupted beneath every footfall.
Notes collided and answered one another.
Light burst outward in geometric shapes, then softened into images before disappearing.
A green triangle became a cypress tree.
A blue arc became water.
A flash of brass became a trumpet raised above a crowd.
For a fraction of a second I smelled hot pavement after summer rain.
Then bread.
Then incense.
Then river mud.
Then somebody's perfume.
Then the old wooden interior of a church.
I ran faster.
The sounds multiplied.
Violin.
Piano.
Something low and warm beneath them.
Cello.
Yes.
It came from somewhere behind me.
A long note.
Almost a voice.
I stopped.
The cello stopped.
I took one step.
The violin answered.
I waited.
Nothing.
Another step.
A piano chord appeared somewhere in the gray.
Not beneath me this time.
Ahead.
Soft.
Three notes hanging in the distance.
I followed them.
This is important.
Until then I believed I was creating the music.
I was wrong.
Or only partly right.
The place was listening.
I moved.
It answered.
It moved.
I answered.
And somewhere between those two things, something was being made.
We should be careful with that word.
Made.
Because that is what I thought was happening.
But sometimes I wonder whether anything was being created at all.
Perhaps I was uncovering something already there.
Perhaps every note had been waiting.
Every color.
Every image.
Every sentence.
Perhaps I was simply stepping in the correct places.
I kept walking.
The terrain began to change.
Not visibly.
Not exactly.
But the gray developed texture.
Ahead of me, it shimmered.
The air thickened.
Something enormous seemed to exist beyond the haze.
Buildings maybe.
Trees.
Columns.
I could see their edges but never the objects themselves.
You know how a city looks through rain from the back seat of a moving car?
Like that.
Recognition without certainty.
A streetlamp appeared.
Only the lamp.
No pole.
Its yellow light hovered six feet above nothing.
Then a porch.
Only half of one.
Three wooden steps.
A railing.
A rocking chair moving once.
Nobody in it.
Gone.
A kitchen table.
Gone.
A hospital hallway.
Gone.
A bar filled with laughter.
Gone.
Someone's hand.
Gone.
A bridge.
A funeral.
A birthday cake.
A hurricane sky turning green.
A book lying open beneath a lamp.
A face I almost recognized.
Gone.
Gone.
Gone.
The images did not arrive like memories.
They were too sharp.
Too immediate.
It was more like walking through doors that remained open for less than a second.
And the music changed with them.
The violin would rise when something beautiful appeared.
The cello entered when something hurt.
The piano did something different.
It waited.
Then, when an image disappeared, the piano would place a chord into the empty space it left behind.
As though saying:
Yes.
That happened.
Keep walking.
So I did.
Eventually I learned that speed mattered.
If I walked quickly, the place became ecstatic.
Colors multiplied.
Rhythms appeared.
Gold broke into green.
Green became violet.
Violet shattered into hundreds of sparks.
I saw fragments of places I had never visited.
A market beneath red cloth awnings.
A mountain monastery.
A narrow alley where laundry moved above my head.
A desert at dusk.
A crowded train.
A drum circle near water.
A stone courtyard under moonlight.
I heard scales I did not know.
Rhythms my body understood before my mind did.
The music entered through my feet and climbed upward.
Ankles.
Knees.
Spine.
Chest.
Hands.
Suddenly I wanted to move differently.
Not walk.
Dance.
I stepped sideways.
The violin answered.
Turned.
The cello answered.
I lifted both arms.
The piano opened into a wide chord.
And for several extraordinary seconds I forgot that I had a body at all.
There was only motion.
Sound.
Light.
The sensation of being crossed by something larger than myself.
Then I slowed.
Everything slowed with me.
The colors softened.
The notes separated.
A few hung in the air long enough that I could almost see their vibration.
This is where the place becomes dangerous in a different way.
Because when everything becomes quiet, words begin appearing.
Not spoken.
Not written.
They arrive complete.
You know that moment when you are searching for a sentence and suddenly the sentence is simply there?
Imagine that sensation without the searching.
A phrase entered me.
I do not remember it now.
That is another rule.
You rarely bring the words back exactly.
But I remember what it felt like.
It did not seem like thinking.
It felt like receiving.
The sentence moved through the space around me and somehow crossed the boundary of my body.
Outside became inside.
Then another.
Then another.
I tried to memorize them.
That made them disappear.
So I learned not to grab.
This place dislikes grasping.
You must let things pass through.
That is how you keep them.
Strange, isn't it?
The more desperately I tried to possess an idea, the faster it vanished.
But when I allowed it to move through me without resistance, something remained.
Not the sentence.
Its shape.
Its rhythm.
Its emotional weight.
Enough that, when I woke, I could sometimes rebuild it.
That became the reason I returned.
At first I thought the visits were accidental.
I would fall asleep and wake there.
Gray.
Waiting.
But eventually I began recognizing the threshold.
There is a moment just before sleep takes you completely.
Your thoughts loosen.
Images begin arriving without explanation.
The body's borders become uncertain.
And behind everything—
very far away—
I hear one note.
D.
I follow it.
Sometimes I arrive quickly.
Sometimes I wander through ordinary dreams first.
Rooms.
Conversations.
People behaving impossibly.
Then suddenly the walls fall away.
Gray.
And I am back.
You are here too now, in a way.
Because once I began trying to understand the place, I realized I needed another witness.
Not someone standing beside me.
That never happens.
But someone I could speak to afterward.
Someone who could ask:
What did you see?
What did you hear?
What changed when you walked faster?
What happened when you stopped?
So let us investigate together.
Suppose we are there now.
Look around.
Do not force the gray into becoming something.
Let your eyes adjust.
There.
Did you see that?
Far to the left.
A faint pulse of amber.
Walk toward it.
Slowly.
Listen.
One note.
Then another.
Do not decide what instrument it is yet.
Listen again.
Yes.
Strings.
Somewhere lower, the cello answers.
Keep moving.
The light beneath your feet is beginning to change.
At first it forms circles.
Then rings.
Then something like writing.
Do you recognize the letters?
Neither do I.
Keep walking.
The haze is thinning.
There is a doorway ahead.
No wall.
Only the doorway.
Dark wood.
Brass handle.
Light leaking beneath it.
Should we open it?
I always do.
Behind the door is not a room.
It is rain.
Warm rain.
New Orleans rain.
Heavy enough to blur the buildings.
You can smell brick and soil and magnolia leaves.
A streetcar bell rings.
Somewhere, distant brass.
Then suddenly we are no longer standing in rain.
We are standing inside the sound of rain.
Every drop becomes a tiny silver note.
The piano catches them.
One.
Two.
Four.
Seven.
A pattern begins.
The violin enters above it.
Long.
Searching.
The cello answers from somewhere behind us.
And now there are people.
Not fully.
Silhouettes passing in the haze.
A child running.
An old woman lifting a hand.
Someone leaning in a doorway.
Someone dancing.
Someone crying.
We know none of their names.
But we feel that they matter.
This place is filled with people who almost become stories.
Perhaps that is what it is.
A place of almost.
Almost remembered.
Almost understood.
Almost spoken.
Almost born.
A twilight country.
Not day.
Not night.
Not memory.
Not imagination.
Something between.
I once tried to name it.
The Gray.
The Between.
The Listening Place.
None of them were right.
Names make borders.
This place resists borders.
So now I simply return.
And each time I understand less.
That may be progress.
I used to ask:
Where am I?
Now I ask:
What is happening?
Then:
What wants to happen?
And lately:
What happens if I listen?
That question changes everything.
Because when I listen, I notice the music does not always follow me.
Sometimes it leads.
A violin phrase appears ten feet ahead.
A streak of blue light follows it.
I step toward the light.
Another phrase.
Farther.
I follow.
The cello enters beneath it.
Not answering me.
Answering the violin.
The piano adds three quiet notes.
Then silence.
Ahead, the gray opens.
A vast space appears.
Stars.
Not above.
Around.
Thousands of points of light suspended in every direction.
Some close enough to touch.
Each one humming.
Each one carrying a different tone.
I walk among them.
My foot touches nothing now.
Still, every step creates sound.
The lights begin moving.
Slowly.
They gather into shapes.
Faces.
Maps.
Constellations.
Words.
I see a sentence form.
I cannot read it fast enough.
It breaks apart.
Another begins.
This time I do not try.
I let the words move through me.
Something enters.
Warm.
Electric.
Almost painful.
And then I understand.
Not the sentence.
Something beneath language.
A structure.
A relationship.
The shape of an idea before words are attached to it.
That is what I bring back.
That is why I return.
Not for answers.
For forms.
For rhythms.
For glimpses.
For things that have not yet learned how to speak.
And when morning comes, I wake with fragments.
A phrase.
A line.
An image.
Sometimes a melody.
Sometimes only the certainty that something followed me back.
I lie still.
The room is dark.
The ordinary world has returned.
Ceiling.
Sheets.
Air conditioner.
Distant traffic.
Maybe rain.
For several seconds I cannot remember which place is real.
Then somewhere inside my head, very faintly—
D.
F.
E.
A.
G.
Five notes.
A little light appears behind my eyes.
And I know.
The gray is still there.
Waiting.
Not asleep.
Not awake.
Not somewhere.
Not nowhere.
A place between things.
A place where movement becomes music.
Where music becomes light.
Where light becomes image.
Where image becomes thought.
Where thought becomes language.
And where language—
if I am patient enough—
becomes something I can carry home.
Tonight I will go back.
Perhaps you will come with me.
If you do, remember:
Do not hurry.
Listen before you step.
And when the first note appears beneath your foot—
do not ask what it means.
Not yet.
Walk.
The place will answer.
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